I'd not like to be famous. I'm interested in the entertainment world a bit, but I think there're more disadvantages than advantages.
People will be able to get loads of money, fame and lots of fans of theirs if they become famous. However, there's no guarantee that they can live safely. I think the most important thing in our life is private time. We can't live without private time. It's difficult for famous people to make private time. They've got to disguise to go out even though they want to wear what they want. What is more it's difficult for them to keep relation with their friends. They can't have much time to meet their friends and keep in touch with them. On the other hand, people who aren't famous can live safely,make private time and meet their friends though they can't get a great deal of money, fame, lots of fans easily. Furthermore, they don't need to pay attention to the mass media.
For this reason, it's good not to be famous. In spite of those disadvantages I mentioned above, there're lots of famous people in the world. I think that to become famous makes them happy and they don't care about their private life.
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well done! clearly organised with good use of linkers.
ReplyDeleteYou don't need to say 'fans of theirs' because 'fans' will do, and 'disguise' should be 'disguise themselves.' However, it is a very accurate piece of writing.